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I prefer to work until late at night.
First, I feel more energetic so I can work well.
Second, I have lots of time to use some facilities in the office.
Third, I can concentrate on my work. It is quiet.
For those reasons, I prefer to work at night.
강사 첨삭
Before I also preferred to work at night.
But now, my preference has changed.
I want to finish my work early so I could take a rest early.
Anyway, thanks for sending this in.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I prefer to work until late at night.
>>> Correct!
First, I feel more energetic so I can work well.
>>> Correct!
Second, I have lots of time to use some facilities in the office.
>>> Correct!
Third, I can concentrate on my work. It is quiet.
>>> OR: Third, I can concentrate on my work because it is quiet.
For those reasons, I prefer to work at night.
>>> Correct!
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