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There are many prestigious schools around the world but I would like to go to Soeul University. This school is the most famous school in Korea.
I want to be the one of the member in that school. I am so wondering how much they study..I can adjust there or not..hehe
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Hello Miss [이름]!
I heard that that\'s really a prestigious school in your country.
I also heard that students have to burn the midnight oil to enter that school.
Anywy, kindly check the corrections below.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
There are many prestigious schools around the world but I would like to go to Soeul University.
>>> Correct!
This school is the most famous school in Korea.
>>> Correct!I want to be the one of the member in that school.
>>> I want to be one of the students in that school.
I am so wondering how much they study..I can adjust there or not..hehe
>>> I am wondering how much they study and whether I can adjust there or not. Hehe!
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