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Write an essay about an experience that was hard but ended up being worth it.
It was the hardest experience when I shoul choose which major I should take. I just followed what my teacher told me so I entered the university
and my major was English. I couldn't adjust there because I didn't know why I should study about it. So I couldn't finish school and went another
school. My major was child education. It was also a hard time because I didn't expect that I should dance, sing, play a role in front of many poeple. However I ended up succefully and I had worked school around 10 years.
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~Teacher Shanee^^,
Write an essay about an experience that was hard but ended up being worth it.It was the hardest experience when I shoul choose which major I should take.
>>> Correct! [should]
I just followed what my teacher told me so I entered the universityand my major was English.
>>> I just followed what my teacher told me so I entered the university and majored in English.
I couldn\'t adjust there because I didn\'t know why I should study about it.
>>> Correct!
So I couldn\'t finish school and went another school.
>>> So I couldn\'t finish school and went to another school.
My major was child education.
>>> Correct! [Child Education]
It was also a hard time because I didn\'t expect that I should dance, sing, play a role in front of many poeple.
>>> It was also a hard time because I didn\'t expect that I should dance, sing and play a role in front of many people.
However I ended up succefully and I had worked school around 10 years.
>>> However, I ended up successful and I had worked in school for around years.
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