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2017-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Write an essay about an experience that was hard but ended up being worth it. It was the hardest experience when I shoul choose which major I should take. I just followed what my teacher told me so I entered the university and my major was English. I couldn't adjust there because I didn't know why I should study about it. So I couldn't finish school and went another school. My major was child education. It was also a hard time because I didn't expect that I should dance, sing, play a role in front of many poeple. However I ended up succefully and I had worked school around 10 years.

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Hi there Miss [이름]! Happy Thursday! I hope you are doing well there. I am excited to talk with you. Thanks for writing this.   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   Write an essay about an experience that was hard but ended up being worth it.It was the hardest experience when I shoul choose which major I should take. >>> Correct! [should] I just followed what my teacher told me so I entered the universityand my major was English. >>> I just followed what my teacher told me so I entered the university and majored in English. I couldn\'t adjust there because I didn\'t know why I should study about it. >>> Correct! So I couldn\'t finish school and went another school. >>> So I couldn\'t finish school and went to another school. My major was child education. >>> Correct! [Child Education] It was also a hard time because I didn\'t expect that I should dance, sing, play a role in front of many poeple. >>> It was also a hard time because I didn\'t expect that I should dance, sing and play a role in front of many people. However I ended up succefully and I had worked school around 10 years. >>> However, I ended up successful and I had worked in school for around years.

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