HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
you were given 3 wishes what would they be and why?
First, my parents' health. I want to be with them for a long time.
Second,I want to have my own bussiness. I want to have a stablelife.
Third, I want to travel Europe. I need enough time to go on a trip.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again!
I guess most people would also wish the same things.
Anyway, I think your wishes are not impossible to come true.^^
~Teacher Shanee^^,
you were given 3 wishes what would they be and why?
First, my parents\' health.
>>> OR: First, I would wish for my parents to be healthy.
I want to be with them for a long time.
>>> Correct!
Second,I want to have my own bussiness.
>>> Second, I want to have my own business.
I want to have a stablelife.
>>> I want to have a stable life.
Third, I want to travel Europe.
>>> Third, I want to travel to Europe.
I need enough time to go on a trip.
>>> Correct!
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