homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Are there any activities that you used to do but don't do anymore? Why did you stop?
I really liked to work out when I was younger.
I enjoyed every sports and even I was good at playing sports.
My P.E teacher recommended to go to University to be a P.E teacher.
However, I am not interested with any sports.
I think that people who are good at playing sports are not attractive
for me. So I tried to be far from those activities. And one more,
I liked to enjoy extreme activities but I can't trust with equipments so
I stop doing those things. It sounds funny..Right?^^;
강사 첨삭
I know some people who are like you MISS [이름].
However, their reasons are different.
Anyway, I am not good at playing sports but I tried to play some when I was in high school.
Even though, I struggled to practice I still enjoyed practicing because I was with my friends.
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Are there any activities that you used to do but don\'t do anymore? Why did you stop?I really liked to work out when I was younger.
>>> Correct!I enjoyed every sports and even I was good at playing sports.
>>> I enjoyed every sport and I was even good at playing sports.My P.E teacher recommended to go to University to be a P.E teacher.
>>> My P.E. teacher recommended going to the university and becoming a P.E. teacher to me. However, I am not interested with any sports.
>>>However, I am not interested in any sports.I think that people who are good at playing sports are not attractivefor me.
>>> Correct!
So I tried to be far from those activities.
>>> Correct!
And one more, I liked to enjoy extreme activities but I can\'t trust with equipments soI stop doing those things.
>>> And one more thing, I liked to enjoy extreme activities but I couldn\'t trust the equipment so I stopped doing those things.
It sounds funny..Right?^^;
>>> It sounds funny, right?^^;
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