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2017-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Are there any activities that you used to do but don't do anymore? Why did you stop? I really liked to work out when I was younger. I enjoyed every sports and even I was good at playing sports. My P.E teacher recommended to go to University to be a P.E teacher. However, I am not interested with any sports. I think that people who are good at playing sports are not attractive for me. So I tried to be far from those activities. And one more, I liked to enjoy extreme activities but I can't trust with equipments so I stop doing those things. It sounds funny..Right?^^;

강사 첨삭

I know some people who are like you MISS [이름]. However, their reasons are different. Anyway, I am not good at playing sports but I tried to play some when I was in high school. Even though, I struggled to practice I still enjoyed practicing because I was with my friends. See you later!   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   Are there any activities that you used to do but don\'t do anymore? Why did you stop?I really liked to work out when I was younger. >>> Correct!I enjoyed every sports and even I was good at playing sports. >>> I enjoyed every sport and I was even good at playing sports.My P.E teacher recommended to go to University to be a P.E teacher. >>> My P.E. teacher recommended going to the university and becoming a P.E. teacher to me. However, I am not interested with any sports. >>>However, I am not interested in any sports.I think that people who are good at playing sports are not attractivefor me. >>> Correct! So I tried to be far from those activities. >>> Correct! And one more, I liked to enjoy extreme activities but I can\'t trust with equipments soI stop doing those things. >>> And one more thing, I liked to enjoy extreme activities but I couldn\'t trust the equipment so I stopped doing those things. It sounds funny..Right?^^; >>> It sounds funny, right?^^;

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