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Good morning, Sir [이름]!

Time has definitely changed.

I miss the times when my mom and I would go to some small shops.

However, those stores are now a memory, for they are now replaced with big establishments TT

Nowadays, we have witnessed violent changes in big cities, with a large slum district changed into the city\'s center of commerce after a giant shopping mall was built out there.

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 In Ilsan city near my hometown a huge apartment complex was set up half a year ago.

>>In Ilsan city, near my hometown, a huge apartment complex was set up half a year ago.
 It has not only residential buildings that are dozens stories tall, but also several supplement facilities such as a big shopping mall, sports facilities, a cinema, and so on.

>>It does not only have residential buildings that are dozens stories tall, but also several supplement facilities such as a big shopping mall, sports facilities, a cinema, and so on.
 Residents in the complex may not bother themselves to dress up to go out, because they can get almost everything inside the arena from shopping to entertainment. 

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 In fact, inside a huge shopping mall, people can enjoy a civilized modern life shopping, meeting, eating working out and entertaining.

>> In fact, inside a huge shopping mall, people can enjoy a civilized modern life shopping, meeting, eating, working out and entertaining.
 It is natural that people continuously pursue conveniency and comfortability saving time.

>> It is natural that people continuously pursue convenience and comfortability saving time.
 However, when a big shopping mall appears, hundreds of tiny old stores may disappear around there.

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 Therefore, many people feel a sense of relative deprivation as the rich become richer and the poor become poorer.

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