Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jack!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Please review my corrections below.
Take note of the proper use of punctuations too.
Take care!
Talk to you later~
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
Hello, Marie.
>> CORRECT!
It is Thursday.
>> CORRECT!
I have never thought about it.
>> CORRECT!
But if i work hard, I will be able to do an executive in my company.
>> But if I work hard, I will be able to become an executive in my company.
But it is very difficult and hard.
>> But it is very difficult.
OR:
>> But it is very hard.
But i can make it.
>> However, I know I can do it.
Because i used to play Taekwondo.
>> I used to play taekwondo.
So i am good healthy and i am about the catches on fast and work well.
>> So I am physically fit and I can catch up on any kind of work well.
So i think i can be a board member.
>> I think I can be a board member.
I want to make more alot of money.
>> I want to make a lot of money.
OR:
>> I want to make more money.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT!
Have a good day, Marie.
>> CORRECT!
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