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2017-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Which do you prefer-a holiday in your country or abroad [vacationing in your country or abroad]? Explain. When I was younger, I liked to drive to a new place in my country. I drove to many places and visited. After being a teacher, it was hard to go somewhere far from my place because I was busy so I was around my place on vacation. However I ran into my students everywhere. I could act naturally because I felt like somebody was looking at me. So I tried to go abroad and I felt much free than before. For now, I like to go abroad on vacation.

강사 첨삭

Most people want to go on a vacation abroad but the problem is their availabity. I hope that you would have a chance to travel abroad in the near future Miss [이름]. Thanks for sending this in. ~Teacher Shanee^^,   Which do you prefer-a holiday in your country or abroad [vacationing in your country or abroad]? Explain.When I was younger, I liked to drive to a new place in my country.>>> Correct! I drove to many places and visited. >>> I visited and drove to many places. After being a teacher, it was hard to go somewhere far from my place because I was busy so I was around my place on vacation. >>> OR: after being a teacher, it was hard to go somewhere far from my place because I was so busy so I just had my vacation around my place. However I ran into my students everywhere. >>> Correct! I could act naturally because I felt like somebody was looking at me. >>> I couldn\'t act naturally because I felt like somebody was looking at me. So I tried to go abroad and I felt much free than before. >>> Correct!For now, I like to go abroad on vacation. >>> Correct!

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