homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Which do you prefer-a holiday in your country or abroad [vacationing in your country or abroad]? Explain.
When I was younger, I liked to drive to a new place in my country.
I drove to many places and visited. After being a teacher, it was hard to go somewhere far from my place because I was busy so I was around my place on vacation. However I ran into my students everywhere. I could act naturally because I felt like somebody was looking at me. So I tried to go abroad and I felt much free than before.
For now, I like to go abroad on vacation.
강사 첨삭
Most people want to go on a vacation abroad but the problem is their availabity.
I hope that you would have a chance to travel abroad in the near future Miss [이름].
Thanks for sending this in.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Which do you prefer-a holiday in your country or abroad [vacationing in your country or abroad]? Explain.When I was younger, I liked to drive to a new place in my country.>>> Correct!
I drove to many places and visited.
>>> I visited and drove to many places.
After being a teacher, it was hard to go somewhere far from my place because I was busy so I was around my place on vacation.
>>> OR: after being a teacher, it was hard to go somewhere far from my place because I was so busy so I just had my vacation around my place.
However I ran into my students everywhere.
>>> Correct!
I could act naturally because I felt like somebody was looking at me.
>>> I couldn\'t act naturally because I felt like somebody was looking at me.
So I tried to go abroad and I felt much free than before.
>>> Correct!For now, I like to go abroad on vacation.
>>> Correct!
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