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2017-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing: What springs to mind when you hear the word 'complain'? What kinds of things do you complain about? When I hear the word 'complain', bad things such as angry faces and loud voices come to my mind. I complain about the food that I don't like such as the fishcake and ham. Also I complain that I want to have a spare time when I need more time to read a book. Have a happy weekend~!!^^

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Good evening, [이름]! (^-^) A Happy Friday to you!   You did a good job in answering your homework. It was brief, yet organized so it\'s easy to understand. Have a great weekend, too. I will see you again on Monday! ^_-   _T. Mayleen :)   When I hear the word \'complain\', bad things such as angry faces and loud voices come to my mind. >> CORRECT! I complain about the food that I don\'t like such as the fishcake and ham.>> I complain about food that I dislike such as fish cake and ham.   Also I complain that I want to have a spare time when I need more time to read a book. >> I also complain when I want to have more time to read books.

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