Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

A great afternoon! ^^

Well, it\'s again start of a new week, so let\'s start it with a bang! :)

Thank you for this composition.

Please do check the corrections

so that we can refrain from doing the same mistakes all over again.

Compare my corrections to your answers and try to understand what

was the mistake in each. :)

Stay positive! ^^

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Hi how are you ? Glenda:D
I don`t feel good today as you know because i fail the job interview 

>> I don\'t feel good today because as you know, I failed the job interview.
 I was depressed all day long so i couldn`t study english 

>> I was depressed all day so I couldn\'t study English.
 Tomorrow i`m gonna submit my resume to other cafe but at the same time i`m really worried about it.

>> Correct

or

>> Tomorrow I will submit my resume to other cafe but at the same time iim really worried about it.
 there is famous saying \"Failure is the mother of success\" i`ll remember the saying when i submit my resume 

>> Correct

or

>> There is saying \"Failure is the mother of success.\" I will remember this saying when I submit my resume.

 In my case when I first see a person , I don`t judge a person`s character quickly cuz some people are different on the inside and out

>> Correct! Good job!
 And used to conceal real image. so such people can be dangerous.

>> Some conceal their real image, so some people can be dangerous.
 In pact, i have experience the person who is different on the inside and outside therefore i changed by this person .

>>  In fact, I had experience with a person who is different on the inside and outside. So I was changed by this person .