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Whew! I am also a morning person, Sir!
I like waking up at 6 AM even on weekends.
I try to be productive as much as I can to accomplish everything and just relax in the afternoon^^
Thanks for writing this paragraph, Sir [이름]^^
I absolutely prefer to get up early and start the day\'s work.
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On second thought, I might have been born as an early bird because my parents were morning people.
>>On a second thought, I might have been born as an early bird because my parents were morning people.
My parents had participated in morning prayers in church throughout all their lives.
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Both of them used to get up at 4 and begin to pray at 4:30, so they had to go to bed before 10.
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Being a morning person could affect my work and army life without proper adjustments.
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I usually have a good and deep sleep and have more regular sleep patterns.
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My peak performance time is in the morning, especially at dawn.
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I always believe that starting my everyday life early offers myself enough time to relish my life and work.
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I usually get up at 4 because I can\'t stay in my bed with my eyes open.
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I feel sleepy when it comes around 10, but I can stay up all night if I overcome the sleepy moment.
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At dawn, I try to listen to the Holly Spirit, come up with gorgeous idea and accumulate some useful knowledge.
>> At dawn, I try to listen to the Holy Spirit, come up with gorgeous idea and accumulate some useful knowledge.
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