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2017-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I absolutely prefer to get up early and start the day's work. On second thought, I might have been born as an early bird because my parents were morning people. My parents had participated in morning prayers in church throughout all their lives. Both of them used to get up at 4 and begin to pray at 4:30, so they had to go to bed before 10. Being a morning person could affect my work and army life without proper adjustments. I usually have a good and deep sleep and have more regular sleep patterns. My peak performance time is in the morning, especially at dawn. I always believe that starting my everyday life early offers myself enough time to relish my life and work. I usually get up at 4 because I can't stay in my bed with my eyes open. I feel sleepy when it comes around 10, but I can stay up all night if I overcome the sleepy moment. At dawn, I try to listen to the Holly Spirit, come up with gorgeous idea and accumulate some useful knowledge.

강사 첨삭

Whew! I am also a morning person, Sir!

I like waking up at 6 AM even on weekends.

I try to be productive as much as I can to accomplish everything and just relax in the afternoon^^

Thanks for writing this paragraph, Sir [이름]^^

I absolutely prefer to get up early and start the day\'s work.

>>CORRECT!
 On second thought, I might have been born as an early bird because my parents were morning people.

>>On a second thought, I might have been born as an early bird because my parents were morning people.
 My parents had participated in morning prayers in church throughout all their lives.

>>CORRECT!
 Both of them used to get up at 4 and begin to pray at 4:30, so they had to go to bed before 10.

>>CORRECT!
 Being a morning person could affect my work and army life without proper adjustments.

>>CORRECT!
 I usually have a good and deep sleep and have more regular sleep patterns.

>>CORRECT!
 My peak performance time is in the morning, especially at dawn.

>>CORRECT!
 I always believe that starting my everyday life early offers myself enough time to relish my life and work.

>>CORRECT!
 I usually get up at 4 because I can\'t stay in my bed with my eyes open.

>>CORRECT!
 I feel sleepy when it comes around 10, but I can stay up all night if I overcome the sleepy moment. 

>>CORRECT!
 At dawn, I try to listen to the Holly Spirit, come up with gorgeous idea and accumulate some useful knowledge.

>> At dawn, I try to listen to the Holy Spirit, come up with gorgeous idea and accumulate some useful knowledge.

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