homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite activity with your siblings?
My favorite activity is playing the piano with my sister.
And, we can play the game each other.
So I don't boring because I play something with my sister at home.
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your favorite activity with your sister. It\'s great that you get along well together.^^
~t. Kelly^^
What is your favorite activity with your siblings?
My favorite activity is playing the piano with my sister.
>> My favorite activity with my sister is playing the piano.
>> My sister and I love playing the piano.
And, we can play the game each other.
>> We play the piano together.
So I don\'t boring because I play something with my sister at home.
>> So, I don\'t feel bored when I play something with my sister at home.
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