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2017-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What are the ways for you to rake it in? How easy is it for you to get it done? ==> I don't know what makes me to rake it in. If I knew the way for me to rake it in, I would be a billionaire. As you know, I am a company worker and I spend much time in the company, so I don't have time to think for earning money except my salary. I hope to study something for better life but I can't do it. Generally, Including me, most of company workers invest a little bit in stocks for earning money but we are looser in stock market. Most of them, they loose money in stock investment. Only a few people succeed in investing in stocks. We just envy those people. Only one way I can be rich is economizing and savings.

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You are quite humorous with your words, James! Thank you for making me smile and laugh again. You have shared so much for me to ponder on, too. Thank you! Protect your savings, my friend. You can do it! Rake it in when the time is ripe. -Klein- What are the ways for you to rake it in?How easy is it for you to get it done?==> I don\'t know what makes me to rake it in. >>CorrectIf I knew the way for me to rake it in, I would be a billionaire.>>CorrectAs you know, I am a company worker and I spend much time in the company, so I don\'t have time to think for earning money except my salary. >>As you know, I am a company worker, so I spend much time in the company and don\'t think about earning money except for my salary.I hope to study something for better life but I can\'t do it.>>I hope to study something for a better life but I can\'t do it.Generally, Including me, most of company workers invest a little bit in stocks for earning money but we are looser in stock market.>>Generally, including me, most company workers invest a little/bit in stock to earn money but we are losers in the stock market. Most of them, they loose money in stock investment.>>Most of them lose money in stock investment. Only a few people succeed in investing in stocks. >>CorrectWe just envy those people.>>CorrectOnly one way I can be rich is economizing and savings. >>The only way I can be rich is by economizing and saving. >>There\'s only one way for me to be rich and that is by economizing and saving.

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