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2017-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Einstein is reported to have said something like,"Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. That's relativity." Time seems to move fast the moment we are having a good time. Whenever we are lost in the activity we are engaged in, we stop paying attention to the time. Meanwhile, time passes most slowly when we are in physical, mental, or emotional pain. As long as we pay attention to the time we anxiously wait for, time seems to go so slowly. But if we pay attention to some activities engrossedly , time seems to move so quickly. Now that I am getting older, time seems to fly by like an arrow. When I recall my teenage years, it seems to me that time moved very slowly at the time. According to some experts, the non-stop supply of novelty in teenage creates rich memories which make those years seem longer when we look back. I wish I could go back to my teenage years.

강사 첨삭

I think we have the same thought, Sir^^

Nothing made me happier than my teenage years.

My mom was still alive, and even though we fought over silly things, I did not have to worry about life.

Thanks for doing this and see you tomorrow!

Einstein is reported to have said something like, \"Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. That\'s relativity.\"

>>CORRECT!
 Time seems to move fast the moment we are having a good time.

>>CORRECT!
 Whenever we are lost in the activity we are engaged in, we stop paying attention to the time.

>>CORRECT!
 Meanwhile, time passes most slowly when we are in physical, mental, or emotional pain.

>>CORRECT!
 As long as we pay attention to the time we anxiously wait for, time seems to go so slowly. 

>>CORRECT!
 But if we pay attention to some activities engrossedly, time seems to move so quickly.

>>CORRECT!
 Now that I am getting older, time seems to fly by like an arrow.

>>CORRECT!
 When I recall my teenage years, it seems to me that time moved very slowly at the time.

>>CORRECT!
 According to some experts, the non-stop supply of novelty in teenage creates rich memories which make those years seem longer when we look back.

>>CORRECT!
 I wish I could go back to my teenage years.

>>CORRECT!

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