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Hi [이름]! ^^

a wonderful afternoon! ^^

Everyone look forward to weekends and I think we really deserve

those treats you mentioned doing for working hard on the previous weekdays.

However, it is also a good habit to include practicing English

even during weekend. :)

It will be a very helpful way to improve your English skills. ;)

Just hold on and keep going. :) You can do that ^^

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Hi how are you ??

It`s difficult to look for a job ..and i get exhausted..

>> ...I\'m exhausted.
 But I`m still trying to get a job and also studying english haha

>> Correct

How do you relax after a busy week? Give specific details.
 When i was busy week , i usaually used to work out.

>> If it was a busy week, I used to work out.
 The reason why do exercise is to develop my strenght

>>  The reason I exercise is to develop my strength.
 After i exercise , i started to be more confident and i felt better 

>>  After I exercise, I start to feel more confident and feel better.
 So i couldn`t stop the exercise ... but now i don`t hahaha 

>> Correct
 Everything is exhausted right now i need something new
If i get a job , i might revive ...

>> Everything is exhausting right now. I need something new if I get a job. I might be revived.