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2017-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How often do you dream? Do you remember all of yyour dreams? I have dreams sometimes. I had good or bad dreams. When I have good dreams, I almost eat delicious food with my friends. When, I have bad dreams, I almost do dangerous advantures alone. And, I can't remember all my dreams because most dreams happened long time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!^^

Thank you for your homework. I am happy that you always try your best to express yourself in English. Keep it up!

~Kelly^^

How often do you dream? Do you remember all of your dreams?
I have dreams sometimes.
>> Correct.
I had good or bad dreams.
>> I had good and bad dreams.
When I have good dreams, I almost eat delicious food with my friends.
>> When I have a good dream, I am eating a delicious food with my friends.
When, I have bad dreams, I almost do dangerous advantures
alone.

>> My bad dream is about doing a dangerous adventure alone.

And, I can\'t remember all my dreams because most dreams happened long time.

>> And, I can\'t remember all my dreams because most of them happened long time ago.

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