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2017-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What would you do if you were given a raw deal? ==> If I were given a raw deal, I couldn't endure that kind of behavior. At that time, first of all, I will check it is reasonable or not. After that if I cannot find any reason, I will ask why I have to receive unfair treatment. It is my opinion when I were given a raw deal. But actually it is very difficult to express when I received unfair act. Especially if it is connected to a family's living, it is difficult to say. So many people endure that kind of behavior for their family. Anyway we take an effort not to receive unfair treatment.

강사 첨삭

This is such a raw deal, James! I\'m kidding! At least I am certain that you can manage any of sort. Thank you for thinking about this deeply and sharing your thoughts. You are even more confident now, my friend. Keep it up! And wow, you finished another composition. I\'ll catch you there! -Klein- What would you do if you were given a raw deal?==> If I were given a raw deal, I couldn\'t endure that kind of behavior.>>Correct! At that time, first of all, I will check it is reasonable or not. >>At that time, first of all, I would check whether it is reasonable or not.After that if I cannot find any reason, I will ask why I have to receive unfair treatment.>>After that, if I cannot find any reason, I will ask why I have to receive an unfair treatment. It is my opinion when I were given a raw deal.>>Correct But actually it is very difficult to express when I received unfair act.>>But actually it is very difficult to express when I received an unfair act. Especially if it is connected to a family\'s living, it is difficult to say. >>Correct So many people endure that kind of behavior for their family.>>CorrectAnyway we take an effort not to receive unfair treatment. >>Anyway, we take an effort not to receive an unfair treatment. 

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