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What are the things you sometimes feel are like a rat race?
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In a like a rat race, we are striving to get a better life.
I sometimes feel sad emotion when I am in that situation.
Why do I have to struggle with them and what do I have to do?
I have to think about that seriously and I have to try for overcoming that situation.
It gives me a stress, so I want to take rest at that time.
In my case I had lived without looking back.
Nowadays I sometimes consider what is real life to me.
I don't find the answer but I try to find the solution.
If I find the solution, I will share with you.
강사 첨삭
You are always very kind!
Thank you for thinking of sharing the solution with me if you find it. I hope you find it soon. Also, I hope you enjoy your journey towards that answer.
As for me, I try to look on the bright side. I hope we can train our mind to do that at all times, my friend.
Thanks for allotting some time for this.
I am excited to exchange ideas with you again.
Until then!
-Klein-
What are the things you sometimes feel are like a rat race?==>In a like a rat race, we are striving to get a better life.
>>In a rat race, we are striving to get a better life.I sometimes feel sad emotion when I am in that situation.
>>I sometimes feel sad emotion when I am in that situation.Why do I have to struggle with them and what do I have to do?>>Correct
I have to think about that seriously and I have to try for overcoming that situation.>>I have to think about that seriously and try to overcome that situation.
It gives me a stress, so I want to take rest at that time.>>It gives me stress, so I want to take a rest at that time.
In my case I had lived without looking back.>>Correct!
Nowadays I sometimes consider what is real life to me.>>Nowadays, I sometimes consider what is real life for me.
I don\'t find the answer but I try to find the solution.>>Correct
If I find the solution, I will share with you.
>>If I find the solution, I will share it with you.
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