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Thank you for writing this enlightening paragraph, Sir!

I realized that I also have to spend time with my dad, because he is also getting old~

It is heartbreaking that young people are so busy making money, they forget to spend some time with their family.

Family closeness can be observed when families maintain emotional connections with each other through encouragement of shared family celebrations, family rituals, and family traditions.

>> Family closeness can be observed when families maintain emotional connections with each other through the encouragement of shared family celebrations, family rituals, and family traditions.
 However, nowadays, families don\'t seem to be as close as in the past.

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 First of all, a decline in the family closeness can be attributed to our busy life styles.

>>First of all, a decline in the family closeness can be attributed to our busy lifestyles.
 Most people don\'t afford to get together because of lack of both money and time.

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 Secondly, the current situations that more losers are being produced make the family connectedness more fragile.

>>CORRECT!
 A poor man or woman who doesn\'t have a decent job wouldn\'t naturally like to join the family reunion.

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 Lastly, people\'s digitalized life could weaken the family closeness.

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 There are a lot of modern entertainment means for young people to enjoy individually according to today\'s advanced technology.

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 But we need to pay attention to what an expert is saying,\"Older individuals who had more family in their network, as well as older people who

were closer with their family, were less likely to die.\"

>>CORRECT!