homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How wide is the gender gap in your country?
-I don't have gender gap in the house
I am a king in the house
But,company have gender gap
Women doesn't make up,she look lazy
강사 첨삭
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How wide is the gender gap in your country?
-I don\'t have gender gap in the house
>> We don\'t feel any gender gap in our house.
I am a king in the house
>> I am the king in our house.
>> I am the queen in our home.
But,company have gender gap
>> But, in companies, there is a wide gender gap.
Women doesn\'t make up,she look lazy
>> When women don\'t put on make up, they look lazy.
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