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2017-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Creative Writing: What springs to mind when you hear the word 'complain'? What kinds of things do you complain about? I often complain about studying. Because I think it is wrong to judge a person by studying.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! :)

 

We all complain about something.

People have an innate need to be acknowledged and will complain to be noticed.

People also complain abou the difficulty of a situation to remove themselves from taking responsibility.

 

Practice English whenever you can.^^

Have a good night!

 

_T. Mayleen (^_^)

 

I often complain about studying.

>> Correct!

 

Because I think it is wrong to judge a person by studying.

>> Because it\'s wrong to judge a person by his/her  study habits and scores only.

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