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2017-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Have you ever been raked over the coals? ==> Dear [Name]. As you know, King Sejong developed Hangul. I think you know a lot of Korean history A lot of foreigner said that Hangul is very difficult to study. But I saw many foreigners that they speak Hangul fluently. You can do it. Let's back to the main point. In my case, I think I did not rake over the coals. Because I didn't want to receive that kind of treatment so I always try to treat equally. But a few people has complain and they raked over the coals. Because they didn't satisfy what I did. Anyway I will keep my attitude for not raking over the coals.

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Good morning, James! Here we are on one of our favorite spots. How do you feel right now? Thank you for your kind words but I know I need to learn so much more from you. Thank you for sharing! Let\'s do our best in everything we do. I\'m here to help you! Until our next chat! Best regards to your family. -Klein- Have you ever been raked over the coals?==>Dear [Name]. >>Dear [Name],As you know, King Sejong developed Hangul. >>CorrectI think you know a lot of Korean history>>Correct A lot of foreigner said that Hangul is very difficult to study.>>A lot of foreigners said that Hangul is very difficult to study. But I saw many foreigners that they speak Hangul fluently.>>Correct You can do it.>>CorrectLet\'s back to the main point. >>Let\'s go back to the main point.In my case, I think I did not rake over the coals.>>Correct Because I didn\'t want to receive that kind of treatment so I always try to treat equally.>>Because I didn\'t want to receive that kind of treatment so I always try to treat things equally.But a few people has complain and they raked over the coals.>>But a few people have complained and raked over the coals. Because they didn\'t satisfy what I did.>>Because they aren\'t satisfied with what I did.Anyway I will keep my attitude for not raking over the coals. >>Correct

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