Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Creative Writing: Would you like to visit the Moon? What would you do if you spent a day on the Moon?
I would like to visit the Moon.
If I spent a day on the Moon, I would play and weigh myself.
Have a nice weekend~!^^
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^--^
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Humans sometimes have difficulty orienting themselves in a low-gravity environment.
Floating in space sounds fun.
However, being on the Moon has a lot of hassle such as wearing adult diapers. :)
I will talk to you again on Monday!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I would like to visit the Moon.
>> Correct!
If I spent a day on the Moon, I would play and weigh myself.
>> If I would spend a day on the Moon, I would play and float in space.
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