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2017-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing: Would you like to visit the Moon? What would you do if you spent a day on the Moon? I would like to visit the Moon. If I spent a day on the Moon, I would play and weigh myself. Have a nice weekend~!^^

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^--^   Thank you so much for answering your homework. Humans sometimes have difficulty orienting themselves in a low-gravity environment. Floating in space sounds fun. However, being on the Moon has a lot of hassle such as wearing adult diapers. :) I will talk to you again on Monday!^^   _T. Mayleen :)   I would like to visit the Moon. >> Correct! If I spent a day on the Moon, I would play and weigh myself. >> If I would spend a day on the Moon, I would play and float in space.

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