Homework

  Hi [이름]! ^^

This is the spirit! ^^

Yes, you have to hold on and move forward and look at the future

in an optimistic way. It maybe disappointing and frustrating at the moment

but don\'t worry, you\'ll get there. :)

Better days are coming.

I admire how you look at and understand your situation.

I hope good news is on it\'s way to you.

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Hello~ Glenda:D how are you?
I`ve been busy looking for a job theseday 

>> I\'ve been busy looking for a job these days.
 I went to lots of cafes for trial but no one call me and no one hire me 

>> I went to a lot of cafes for trial but no one called me and no one hired me yet.
 So i decided to change the all rounder cuz they need 2~3 year experience

>> Correct
 as barista therefore my plan is after being all rounder i would learn how to operate the cafe  

>> Therefore my plan is to be an all rounder and learn how to operate the caf