Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: Who is the nicest person in the world?
I think Edison is the nicest person in the world.
He invented many great useful things so we live a better life.
He wasn't afraid of failures.
He always did his best.
Have a happy holiday~!^^
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
I\'ve read it well.
I respect your opinion and I agree that he invented a lot of good stuff.
Enjoy your weekend!
_T. Mayleen :)
I think Edison is the nicest person in the world.
>> Correct!
He invented many great useful things so we live a better life.
>> He invented many useful things, so we could live a better life.
He wasn\'t afraid of failures.
>> Correct!
He always did his best.
>> Correct!
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