homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Can people live in a dessert?
No, they can\'t.
>> Correct.
Dessert has not water.
>> There is no water in the desert.
Sometimes,it has water in the dessert,but the waters are not as much as people live in the dessert.
>> Sometimes, there is little water, but it is not sufficient for people to live/survive in the desert.
And in the desserts has big difference to temperature at daytime and night, so people will get a cold easily.
>> And in the desert, there is a big difference in the temperature at daytime and nighttime, so people will get cold easily.
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