homework

Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!

Thank you for trying your best to answer the question. Please study the corrections I wrote down for your review.

See you in class!^^

~Kelly^^

What things do you first notice about someone\'s appearance?
I didn\'t understand your question.

>> Correct.
but,someone\'s appearance.......

>> But, when we talk about someone\'s appearance..
maybe,my sister was.

>> I can talk about my sister.
she is kind and is cute.

>> She is kind and cute.

she wasloved by everyone

>> She was loved by everyone.
so,i knew her appearance first

>> So, I always recognize her appearance first.
I don not know if I am right
>> I don\'t know if I am right.
I advice your commment.

>> I read your comment.

The books don\'t have my level books 

>> The books are not appropriate for my level.
SO, i will read English paper in power english web-site.
>> So, I will read English materials at Power English website.
good night^^ Kelly

>> Correct.