Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Jack!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Good job here.
I\'m glad that you are different from most Korean parents.
Your future kids will be very lucky to have you as a father.
Please check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
Hello, Marie!
>> CORRECT!
It is raining here.
>> CORRECT!
How about there?, Anyway
>> How is it there?
OR:
>> How is the weather there?
In my case, I don\'t want children to go to a private institutes.
>> In my opinion, I don\'t want to go to private institutes.
Because I didn\'t want to go there when i was young.
>> CORRECT!
>> I
I liked to hang out with my friends near my house.
>> CORRECT!
So children should play out side with them friends when they were young.
>> So I think children should play with their friends while they are still young.
It will be memorable later.
>> CORRECT!
Going to the private institutes are a burden to them parents.
>> Going to private institutes is also a burden to the parents.
Because it is very expensive.
>> CORRECT!
So i don\'t want children to go there.
>> CORRECT!
>> I
OR:
>> That\'s why I don\'t want my children to go there.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT!
Have a good day, Marie.
>> CORRECT!
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