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2017-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Describe one racket you’ve heard of. How do you feel about it? ==> I heard that some people who know the national land development plan earn a lot of money using their information power. They bought some lands before the lands prices are not rising and they sell those lands after the lands prices rise. They earn the money very easily and they enjoy their life with that money. When I see that kind of person, I am very angry because it is not fair. Common people work hard for their better life. I think ordinary people should be a good country to live in. I hope that there is no one racket.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, James! It\'s good to know how you feel about real estate. Nonetheless, there may be a good light to it. Take it easy, my friend. You\'ll soon get what you want and deserve for such hard work. All the best! -Klein- Describe one racket you’ve heard of.How do you feel about it?==>I heard that some people who know the national land development plan earn a lot of money using their information power.>>Correct! They bought some lands before the lands prices are not rising and they sell those lands after the lands prices rise. >>They bought some land before the land prices were not rising and they sold those after the prices rose.They earn the money very easily and they enjoy their life with that money.>>Correct! When I see that kind of person, I am very angry because it is not fair.>>Correct Common people work hard for their better life.>>Common people work hard for better life. I think ordinary people should be a good country to live in.>>I think ordinary people should be in a good country to live in. I hope that there is no one racket. >>Correct

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