homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What was the most enjoyable thing that you did during your holiday?
Usually,I don't watch tv.
I am watching tv when my kids don't study.
so.I watched tv in holiday.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you enjoyed the TV program you watched during your holiday.^^
~Kelly^^
What was the most enjoyable thing that you did during your holiday?
Usually,I don\'t watch tv.
>> Usually, I don\'t watch TV.
I am watching tv when my kids don\'t study.
>> I watch TV when my kids don\'t have classes.
so.I watched tv in holiday.
>> So, I watched TV during the holiday.
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