Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: How often do you watch TV? If you could design a new television show to boost ratings, what kind of show would it be?
I watch TV twice a week.
If I could design a new television show to boost ratings, I would make a funny and beneficial animation like Pororo.
Have a good night~!!^^
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Good evening, [이름]! Happy Thursday!
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Thank you for doing your homework.
It\'s a good idea. Children and adults as well never get tired of animations that teach good lessons.
I can\'t wait to listen to your insights again.
See you tomorrow!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I watch TV twice a week.
>> CORRECT!
If I could design a new television show to boost ratings, I would make a funny and beneficial animation like Pororo.
>> ...I would make a funny and educational animation jus like \'Pororo\'.
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