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2017-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi Glenda:D how are you?? Yes you`re right as you told me i must speak and listen english as much as i can . so i decide to go to church where can study english with native speakers while i`m waiting for my interview result. hahaha What is your opinion on men doing 'women's jobs' such as call center agent, nurse and daycare teacher? Do you think it's appropriate? What would you tell someone who discriminates and criticizes these men? Here are my answeres! It`s absolutely appropriate ! why not? is there a reason not to do ?? As you can see around , there are so many men nurse and daycare teacher something like that ..also there is manny . manny is a combination of nanny and man so i mean men can women`s jobs ! Likewise women can! Is it wrong doing what they love?? you can`t really judge anyone!

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Hi [이름]! ^^ Great afternoon! ^^   Thank you for your opinion. :) Good job on this, it is a good practice for you to play with your vocabulary and challenge yourself to think outside the box and express yourself. Topics like this can make you think in creative ways and will help you practice more on your writing skills and of course, your grammar. Keep it up!   See you!   Teache Glenda   Here are my corrections: Hi Glenda:D how are you?? Yes you`re right as you told me I must speak and listen english as much as I can . >> Correct (Again, \'I\' will always be in a capital letter.) so i decide to go to church where can study english with native speakers while i`m waiting for my interview result. hahaha >> So I decided to go to church where I can study english with native speakers while waiting for my interview results. hahaha What is your opinion on men doing \'women\'s jobs\' such as call center agent, nurse and daycare teacher? Do you think it\'s appropriate? What would you tell someone who discriminates and criticizes these men?Here are my answeres! It`s absolutely appropriate ! why not? is there a reason not to do ?? >> It`s absolutely appropriate! Why not? Is there a reason not to? As you can see around , there are so many men nurse and daycare teacher something like that ..also there is manny . manny is a combination of nanny and man so i mean men can women`s jobs ! Likewise women can! >> As you can see around , there are so many men nurses and daycare teachers. Also there are manny, manny is a combination of nanny and man. So what I mean is men can do women`s job ! Likewise with women, they can do men\'s job!Is it wrong doing what they love?? you can`t really judge anyone! >> Correct or>> Is it wrong to do what they love?? You can`t really judge anyone! 

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