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2017-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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In fact, living at home with their parents gives college students a lot of benefits. They can save tons of money and focus on studying easily. Restrictions are good for youngsters because they are still immature. If it weren't for certain restrictions, they would be out of control for the most part. Having a family around them can set limits for how far they can go. Having said that, I agree that it's better for college students to live away from home. In the long run, trial and error should be experienced as early as possible for their better future. Youths have to learn how to build a strong relationship and how to manage conflict on their own blending in with people from different backgrounds. In addition to studying hard, they have to obtain a great amount of practical experience which must be vitally useful for their later real life. However, while they are away from home, their family members need to keep in touch with them regularly as long as it doesn't hinder them from building up their independence.

강사 첨삭

I strongly believe that having a supportive family around you is one of the best things while studying :)

I was really happy when my mom would prepare everything and cheer me up when I felt down.

Thank you for doing your homework, Sir!

Have a great Monday!

In fact, living at home with their parents gives college students a lot of benefits.

>>CORRECT!

They can save tons of money and focus on studying easily.

>>CORRECT!
 Restrictions are good for youngsters because they are still immature.

>>CORRECT!
 If it weren\'t for certain restrictions, they would be out of control for the most part.

>>CORRECT!
 Having a family around them can set limits for how far they can go.

>> Having a family around them can set limits on how far they can go.
 Having said that, I agree that it\'s better for college students to live away from home.

>>CORRECT!
 In the long run, trial and error should be experienced as early as possible for their better future.

>>CORRECT!
 Youths have to learn how to build a strong relationship and how to manage conflict on their own blending in with people from different backgrounds. 

>>Youths have to learn how to build a strong relationship and how to manage conflict on their own, blending in with people from different backgrounds. 
 In addition to studying hard, they have to obtain a great amount of practical experience which must be vitally useful for their later real life.

>>CORRECT!
 However, while they are away from home, their family members need to keep in touch with them regularly as long as it doesn\'t hinder them from building up their independence.

>>CORRECT!

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