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I strongly believe that having a supportive family around you is one of the best things while studying :)
I was really happy when my mom would prepare everything and cheer me up when I felt down.
Thank you for doing your homework, Sir!
Have a great Monday!
In fact, living at home with their parents gives college students a lot of benefits.
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They can save tons of money and focus on studying easily.
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Restrictions are good for youngsters because they are still immature.
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If it weren\'t for certain restrictions, they would be out of control for the most part.
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Having a family around them can set limits for how far they can go.
>> Having a family around them can set limits on how far they can go.
Having said that, I agree that it\'s better for college students to live away from home.
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In the long run, trial and error should be experienced as early as possible for their better future.
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Youths have to learn how to build a strong relationship and how to manage conflict on their own blending in with people from different backgrounds.
>>Youths have to learn how to build a strong relationship and how to manage conflict on their own, blending in with people from different backgrounds.
In addition to studying hard, they have to obtain a great amount of practical experience which must be vitally useful for their later real life.
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However, while they are away from home, their family members need to keep in touch with them regularly as long as it doesn\'t hinder them from building up their independence.
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