Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jack!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Please take note of proper capitalization in your sentences.
I reviewed your sentences here.
Kindly take note of my corrections.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
Hello, Marie.
>> CORRECT!
It is sunday.
>> CORRECT!
*Sunday
What are you doing?
>> CORRECT!
I think, Both are bad.
>> I think both are bad.
Because I like to travel and live another country.
>> Because I would like to travel and live in another country.
If i have to live another country.
>> If I have to live in another country.
I would like to go to paris.
>> I would like to live in Paris.
Because Switzerland has many beatiful scenery and quiet street than our country.
>> Switzerland has many beautiful sceneries and the streets there are quieter than in our country.
So I decided to live to Switzerland later
>> So I decided to live in Switzerland later.
But It is my dream life.
>> That is my dream life.
Switzerland is more expensive price than our country.
>> The cost of living in Switzerland is more expensive than in our country.
But Id like to live there later.
>> But I\'d like to live there later.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT!
Let\'s see you tomorrow, Marie.
>> See you tomorrow, Marie.
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