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2017-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Which would be worse: having to leave the country and never return, or never being able to travel more than 150 miles from where you live now? Hello, Marie. It is sunday. What are you doing? anyway I think, Both are bad. Because I like to travel and live another country. If i have to live another country. I would like to go to paris. Because Switzerland has many beatiful scenery and quiet street than our country. So I decided to live to Switzerland later But It is my dream life. Switzerland is more expensive price than our country. But Id like to live there later. Thank you. Let's see you tomorrow, Marie.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jack!

Thanks for doing your homework.

Please take note of proper capitalization in your sentences. 

I reviewed your sentences here.

Kindly take note of my corrections.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

Hello, Marie.

>> CORRECT!
 It is sunday.

>> CORRECT!

*Sunday
 What are you doing?
>> CORRECT!
I think, Both are bad.

>> I think both are bad.
 Because I like to travel and live another country.

>> Because I would like to travel and live in another country.
 If i have to live another country.

>> If I have to live in another country.
 I would like to go to paris.

>> I would like to live in Paris.
 Because Switzerland has many beatiful scenery and quiet street than our country.

>> Switzerland has many beautiful sceneries and the streets there are quieter than in our country.
 So I decided to live to Switzerland later

>> So I decided to live in Switzerland later.
 But It is my dream life.

>> That is my dream life.
 Switzerland is more expensive price than our country.

>> The cost of living in Switzerland is more expensive than in our country.
 But Id like to live there later.
>> But I\'d like to live there later.
Thank you.

>> CORRECT!
 Let\'s see you tomorrow, Marie.

>> See you tomorrow, Marie.

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