Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
(^-^) Happy Tuesday!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
You did a good job here!
I sort of agree with you.
Climate change is a global problem.
We\'re experiencing extreme weathers and unfamiliar phenomenons.
But I guess, it\'s the effect of trying to make our lives convenient.
We have cars, factories, chemicals, etc.
I will talk to you again later in class. ^^
See you!
_T. Mayleen :)
These days fine dust from China is a big problem.
>> CORRECT!
So I wish to have cleaner air for my country, my family members and my friends.
>> So I wish to have a cleaner air for my country for my family members, and my friends.
I also wish to stop global warming.
>> CORRECT!
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