Homework

2017-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative Writing: What wish do you have for your country? For your family members? For your friends? These days fine dust from China is a big problem. So I wish to have cleaner air for my country, my family members and my friends. I also wish to stop global warming. Have a nice dream.^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!

(^-^) Happy Tuesday!

 

Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

You did a good job here!

I sort of agree with you.

Climate change is a global problem.

We\'re experiencing extreme weathers and unfamiliar phenomenons.

But I guess, it\'s the effect of trying to make our lives convenient.

We have cars, factories, chemicals, etc.

 

I will talk to you again later in class. ^^

See you!

 

_T. Mayleen :)

 

These days fine dust from China is a big problem.

>> CORRECT!

So I wish to have cleaner air for my country, my family members and my friends.

>> So I wish to have a cleaner air for my country for my family members, and my friends.

I also wish to stop global warming.

>> CORRECT!

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