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2017-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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1.I had the ordinary day at school. 2.She is the ordinary girl in my class. 3.The dinner was very ordinary. My mom helped me making sentences. Good night ^^

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A MAGNIFICENT Monday to you! ^.^


First of all, I would like to thank you for doing your homework. ^^

I liked it so much.

However, be careful with the following:

1. Spacing ~ There should be a space after the number.

2. Usage of Articles ~ Know the rules on how to use a, an and the.

3. Punctuation Marks ~ Use correct punctuation marks.


That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~


P.S.: Good night! ^.^ Sleep tight! ^.~



1.I had the ordinary day at school.

>> 1. I had an ordinary day at school.

2.She is the ordinary girl in my class.

>> 2. She is an ordinary girl in my class.

3.The dinner was very ordinary.

>> CORRECT!

My mom helped me making sentences.

>> My mom helped me make sentences.

>> OR: My mom helped me in making sentences.

>> OR: My mom helped me make these sentences.

>> OR: My mom helped me make the sentences.

Good night ^^

>> Good night! ^^

>> OR: Good night. ^^

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