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2017-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi how are you??? My confidence is being down...after having failed a job interview I don`t know why...so yesterday after church , i felt low and i didn`t do anything.. But it`s okay if i do my best , great things will happen someday I think I would rather keep my old memories and not be able to make new ones.cuz my childhood is full of happiness and my all memories are too valuable to me . but some people want to lose their all old memories I`m just curious What kind of life could they live when they were child ? i don`t know why haha

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^


I understand where you\'re coming from.

It can really be so disappointing and frustrating to fail job interviews

where you put your best on. 

But hey, good job in still being optimistic. :)

That is a very good attitude towards circumstances like this. 

Remember, in times of challenges and frustrations, the best motivation

will come from no one but you yourself. 

Don\'t give up, take that challenge that life is giving you. :)

Do something about all the reasons why you failed and be a better [이름]. :)

It will pay off in the end. :)


See you! 


Teacher Glenda 


Hi how are you???
My confidence is being down...after having failed a job interview 

>>My confidence I going down after I failed the job interview.
 I don`t know why...so yesterday after church , i felt low and i didn`t do anything..

>>Correct

But it`s okay if i do my best , great things will happen someday 

>> Correct

or

>>> But it\'s okay if I will keep doing my best, great things will happen.

 I think I would rather keep my old memories and not be able to make new ones.cuz my childhood is full of happiness and my all memories are too valuable to me .

>> I think I would rather keep my old memories and not be able to make new ones because my childhood was full of happiness and all my memories are so valuable to me .

but some people want to lose their all old memories 

>> But some people want to lose all of their old memories.
 I`m just curious What kind of life could they live when they were child ? i don`t know why haha

>>  I`m just curious what kind of life have they lived when they were children?  I don`t know why haha

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