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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for your composition today! Uber has gained infamous reputation because of harassment issues. It\'s too bad that they have a lot of such case to deal with.
T. JanE ^^
Title: Uber fires 20 staff after harassment investigation.
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Uber has fired many employees because of bullying, issues about poor company and harassment.
>> Uber has fired many employees because of bullying, harassment issues, and poor company management.
So, some executives resigned for this situation.
>> So some executives resigned due to this situation.
Also, Uber has suffered from being taken legal actions against many things.
>> Correct
Uber company is joining a former executive of another company because it wants to solve the difficult problems.
>> Correct
In My Opinion I heard that Uber company runs the chauffeur service but it is not famous in Korea because Korea is the strongest IT country in the world.
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So, there are many chauffeeur service here.
>> There are many chauffer services here.
Although Uber came here, it was not successful.
>> Correct
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