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Title : hail, drought devastate Korean regions

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Hail had fallen throughout Korea.

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These days, we have emergency situation such as chaing climate because of global warming.

>> These days, we have emergency situation such as climate change due to global warming.

In the event, the hailstones smashed harvest like fruit, vegerables and rice paddies.

>> Hailstones smashed fruits, vegetables, and rice paddies.

Especially, fruit farms were damaged a lot like apple, pear and watermelon.
>> Many fruit farms were damaged. 
In My Opinion Korea had four distinct season when I was young.

>> Korea had four distinct seasons when I was young.

But a few years ago, it has changed a lot into summer and winter.

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Sping and autumn disappear now.

>> Spring and autumn have disappeared. 

Yesterday, I heard the news that China is suffering from heavy rain.

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So, many people have lived in the shelter.

>> So many people stayed in a shelter. 

The earth is sending us the signs like saving, protecting, preserving, but we have ignored continuouly.

>> The earth is sending us signs to save, protect, and preserve the environment but we keep ignoring them.