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What is your favorite musical? Do you think kids must watch musicals?
My favorite musical is Eletricman.
This musical's story is eletricman saves the animals who suffer from villain.
I think kids must watch musicals.
Because,the musicals give for kids to exciting and funny.
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Thank you for sharing the story of your favorite musical. I think, you really enjoyed watching it.^^
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~t. Kelly^^
What is your favorite musical? Do you think kids must watch musicals?
My favorite musical is Eletricman.
>> My favorite musical is Electricman.
This musical\'s story is eletricman saves the animals who suffer from villain.
>> The musical\'s story is about saving the animals who suffered from the villain.
I think kids must watch musicals.
>> Correct.
Because,the musicals give for kids to exciting and funny.
>> Because children can have an exciting and funny experience.
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