homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Essay: How often do you watch TV? If you could design a new television show to boost ratings, what kind of show would it be?
I'm watch TV everyday. If i can design a new television show, i will make K-popstar show program !!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)
In Korea, you already have a lot of K-pop star shows like Weekly Idol and Inkigayo.
You should think of a unique concept. ^^
Anyway, thank you for answering your homework.
See you again tomorrow!
_T. Mayleen :)
I\'m watch TV everyday.
>> I watch TV everyday.
If i can design a new television show, i will make K-popstar show program !!
>> If I could design a new television show, I will make a program for K-pop stars.
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