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Good evening, [이름]! (^-^)
Maybe there are still companies who look at the academic achievements of applicants.
However, many employers now prefer skilled workers more than academic achievers.
We can discuss this tomorrow if you want, too. :)
_T. Mayleen :)
I want to a world where grades are not important.
>> I would like a world where grades aren\'t important.
Because now, a lot of student and adalt have a lot of stress. because of their grades.
>> Students even adults have a lot of stress because of their grades.
Even if they do something good, it is very difficult to have a job if they do not study well. So i want to a world where grades are not important.
>> Even if they do something good, it\'s very difficult to get a job if you din\'t study well, so I\'d want a world where grades are not important.
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