Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When do you usually put up a good front?
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In my case, I always put up a good front when I am with my daughter.
Because my daughter always waits for me in the evening.
Unfortunately I usually come back home late because of my work in the company.
I am a father of her, I have to take care of her.
So if my daughter doesn't go to bed when I came home, I have to express that I am very happy with her, although my feeling is not good or I am very tired.
Anyway, my daughter gives me a good energy, so my feeling is changed better.
As a result of our efforts, we are keeping good relation with my daughter.
강사 첨삭
Bravo! You are such a role model, James.
How I wish you could share that personality of yours with your son and all other fathers.
Thanks for sharing! You inspired me once again, my friend!
I bet you miss your family more and more each day. I must say that they also miss you.
Hang in there! Time flies, so in a blink, you\'re together again.
Whip up a surprise for them!
-Klein-
When do you usually put up a good front?==>In my case, I always put up a good front when I am with my daughter.
>>CorrectBecause my daughter always waits for me in the evening.
>>CorrectUnfortunately I usually come back home late because of my work in the company.>>Correct
I am a father of her, I have to take care of her.>>I am her father, so I have to take care of her.
So if my daughter doesn\'t go to bed when I came home, I have to express that I am very happy with her, although my feeling is not good or I am very tired.>>So if my daughter hasn\'t gone to bed when I came home, I would have to express that I am very happy with her although my feeling is not good or I am very tired.
Anyway, my daughter gives me a good energy, so my feeling is changed better.>>Anyway, my daughter gives me good energy, so my feeling becomes better.
As a result of our efforts, we are keeping good relation with my daughter.
>>Correct
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