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Good morning, Sir [이름]^^
I believe that all people have a chance to grow, so we must nurture their abilities at any age.
Furthermore, I strongly claim that all of us are talented, only in different ways :)
Have a great and I am very excited to discuss our class with you!
I found out that not a few my friends had gotten their jobs unrelated to their majors in college.
>>I found out that not a few of my friends had gotten their jobs unrelated to their majors in college.
In fact, young children take too many classes and study a lot of subjects.
>>CORRECT!
However, who knows if one of the subjects gives him or her a great opportunity to succeed in life in the future?
>>CORRECT!
Studying some subjects means not only acquiring knowledge but also developing intellectual capacity.
>>CORRECT!
Each subject contains its unique field of intellectual capacity.
>>CORRECT!
Recently, the importance of human science has been put emphasis on engineering and manufacturing.
>>Recently, the importance of human science has been emphasized on engineering and manufacturing.
That\'s because some inspirations and ideas could be popped up from studying human science.
>> That\'s because some inspirations and ideas could be pop up by studying human science.
Some children tend to show their talents and aptitudes very early from the elementary school.
>>CORRECT!
Meanwhile, some people are far behind others when they are children, but after entering college, they begin to be enlightened and they are developed very quickly.
>>CORRECT!
As mentioned above, we need to keep an eye on all children and have to encourage them to study properly.
>>CORRECT!
We must not judge them to retarded children too early.
>> We must not judge them as retarded children too early.
Historically, not a few geniuses revealed their capability very late.
>>CORRECT!
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