Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday evening, [이름]! ^-^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
You did a good job here!^^
I totally agree with your opinion.
I wish schools in the Philippines would sell healthy snacks.
Unfortunately, it\'s the entire opposite. :\'(
I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow!
_T. Mayleen :)
I think fast food, soda and sweets should not be sold in school cafeterias.
>> I think fast food, soda, and sweets should not be sold in school cafeterias.
DON\'T FORGET YOUR PUNCTUATION MARKS.
It is because those foods are bad for health.
>> CORRECT!
Schools had better make students eat healthy food.
>> Schools should prepare healthy foods for the students.
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