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2017-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What are the things that can palliate depression? ==> I can soothe depression as I exercise. If my emotion is bad, I will go to gym for exercising. Exercising is good for body and mental health. But it is hard for me because I don't have enough power in the gym. As you know I go gym approximately twice a week because of work. I sweat when I exercise,and maybe, it can palliate depression. In my case, the best way to alleviate depression is exercising.

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I am glad you got such way to palliate depression, my friend. How do you feel at this hour? Cheer up! You must be excited for your possible trip tomorrow, because I am! That\'s good for you. I bet you will feel refreshed. All the best! Stay safe and sound, James. -Klein- What are the things that can palliate depression?==>I can soothe depression as I exercise.>>Correct If my emotion is bad, I will go to gym for exercising. >>If my emotion is bad, I will go to gym for exercise.Exercising is good for body and mental health.>>Correct But it is hard for me because I don\'t have enough power in the gym.>>Correct As you know I go gym approximately twice a week because of work.>>As you know, I go to gym approximately twice a week because of work. I sweat when I exercise,and maybe, it can palliate depression.>>Correct In my case, the best way to alleviate depression is exercising. >>Correct

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