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What are the things that can palliate depression?
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I can soothe depression as I exercise.
If my emotion is bad, I will go to gym for exercising.
Exercising is good for body and mental health.
But it is hard for me because I don't have enough power in the gym.
As you know I go gym approximately twice a week because of work.
I sweat when I exercise,and maybe, it can palliate depression.
In my case, the best way to alleviate depression is exercising.
강사 첨삭
I am glad you got such way to palliate depression, my friend.
How do you feel at this hour?
Cheer up!
You must be excited for your possible trip tomorrow, because I am!
That\'s good for you. I bet you will feel refreshed.
All the best!
Stay safe and sound, James.
-Klein-
What are the things that can palliate depression?==>I can soothe depression as I exercise.>>Correct
If my emotion is bad, I will go to gym for exercising.
>>If my emotion is bad, I will go to gym for exercise.Exercising is good for body and mental health.>>Correct
But it is hard for me because I don\'t have enough power in the gym.>>Correct
As you know I go gym approximately twice a week because of work.>>As you know, I go to gym approximately twice a week because of work.
I sweat when I exercise,and maybe, it can palliate depression.>>Correct
In my case, the best way to alleviate depression is exercising.
>>Correct
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