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What traditional values are not important or not necessary now?
It is changing but some are keeping this culture like women's work and
men's work. Be a girl, Act like a girl. Don't cry because you are a boy..
Like those lines makes us not to be ourselves.
Women can carry heavy things and men dont need to help women carrying heavy things...Of course if I compare men to women, most men are strong than women but I guess not all.
We shouldnt educate people like this and I think this thing is not neccessary to keep as our culture.
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I can feel you Miss [이름]!
This is a very interesting topic. I hope we could talk about this in class.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
It is changing but some are keeping this culture like women\'s work and
men\'s work.
>>> Correct!
Be a girl, Act like a girl.
>>> If you are a girl, then act like a girl.
Don\'t cry because you are a boy..
>>> Correct!
Like those lines makes us not to be ourselves.
Like those lines makes us not to be ourselves.
>>> Those lines make us pretentious.
>>> OR: Because of those lines, we cannot be ourselves.
Women can carry heavy things and men dont need to help women carrying heavy things...
Women can carry heavy things and men dont need to help women carrying heavy things...
>>> Women can carry heavy things and men don\'t need to help them.
Of course if I compare men to women, most men are strong than women but I guess not all.
>>> Of course, if I compare men to women, most men are stronger than women.
We shouldnt educate people like this and I think this thing is not neccessary to keep as our culture.
>>> We shouldn\'t educate people like this and I this thing is not necessary to keep as our culture.
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