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2017-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Describe something you could never give away. Include your reason why you could never give it away. I guess my car. I have been driving when I was 18. So I cant live without the car. I had changed my car 4times and I have a red car now. I bought this car by myself so I have deffrent feelings from others. Teacher~ Is that right? I am so confused with this question...I just did my best. Please understand me even if it is not correct. ^^;

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Hi there MISS [이름]!

How are you? I hope you are doing fine there.

Anyway, I checked your homework. Don\'t worry because you were able to respond accordingly to the question.

Thanks for effort!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

Describe something you could never give away. Include your reason why you could never give it away.

I guess my car.

>>> I guess, it\'s my car.

I have been driving when I was 18.

>>> I have been driving since I was 18.
So I cant live without the car.

>>> So I can\'t live without a car.
I had changed my car 4times and I have a red car now.

>>> I had changed my car four times and I have a red car now.
I bought this car by myself so I have deffrent feelings from others.

>>> I bought this car by myself so I feel differently from others.

Teacher~
Is that right?
I am so confused with this question...I just did my best.
Please understand me even if it is not correct. ^^;

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