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Horse knows when he is going to race. How does he know? His breakfast was scanty. (He is angry about that.) He does not have a saddle on his back. He is being led, not ridden, to grandstand. He is led under grandstand into an unusual, special stall. Horse is nervous. Sometimes he does not know what to do when starting a gate flies open and a track is before him. If he does not begin to run instantly, other horses are already ahead of him. During race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he will try to pass him. Sometimes a jockey holds him back to save his energy for last stretch. Eventually horse gets to run as fast as he can. An exercise boy, watching an owner's favorite jockey riding horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing. Secretly, he is planning for a day when he will be a jockey himself, and his horse will be first to cross finish a line.
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>>> A horse
He does not have a saddle on his back.
>>> Correct!
He is being led, not ridden, to grandstand.
>>> to the grandstand
He is led under grandstand into an unusual, special stall.
>>> He is led under the grandstand into an unusual, special stall.
Horse is nervous.
>>> The horse is nervous.
Sometimes he does not know what to do when starting a gate flies open and a track is before him.
>>> the starting gate, the track
If he does not begin to run instantly, other horses are already ahead of him. During race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he will try to pass him.
>>> during the race
Sometimes a jockey holds him back to save his energy for last stretch.
>>> Correct!
Eventually horse gets to run as fast as he can.
>>> the horse
An exercise boy, watching an owner\'s favorite jockey riding horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing.
>>> The exercise boy, the owner\'s favorite, riding the horse
Secretly, he is planning for a day when he will be a jockey himself, and his horse will be first to cross finish a line.
>>> the day, the finish line
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