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What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts?
Maybe because of our ideas. Each person has their own thinking. If we don't
try to understand eache other, we would have argue.
We alreadt knew that we should understand each other but it is hard to accept the other's thinking right off the bat.
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Thanks for sharing your ideas regarding the topic Miss [이름]!
I hope we could talk more about this topic in class.
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~Teacher Shanee^^,
What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts?
Maybe because of our ideas.
>>> Maybe some conflicts occur because of our ideas.
Each person has their own thinking.
>>> Each person has his or her own way of thinking.
If we don\'t try to understand eache other, we would have argue.
>>> If we don\'t try to understand each other, we might end up arguing.
We alreadt knew that we should understand each other but it is hard to accept the other\'s thinking right off the bat.
>>> We already knew that we should understand each other but sometimes it it hard to accept other people\'s thoughts right off the bat.
I hope we could talk more about this topic in class.
See you!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts?
Maybe because of our ideas.
>>> Maybe some conflicts occur because of our ideas.
Each person has their own thinking.
>>> Each person has his or her own way of thinking.
If we don\'t try to understand eache other, we would have argue.
>>> If we don\'t try to understand each other, we might end up arguing.
We alreadt knew that we should understand each other but it is hard to accept the other\'s thinking right off the bat.
>>> We already knew that we should understand each other but sometimes it it hard to accept other people\'s thoughts right off the bat.
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